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 Boulder Fist Jutsu! ( perfected Form )

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PostSubject: Boulder Fist Jutsu! ( perfected Form )   Mon 21 Jul - 18:34

Name:Boulder Fist Jutsu

Specialty:Taijutsu
Element: No Element used
Type: Offensive

Visual Standing of the attack:

DAMAGE:
B-ranked: 1.5 inch cuts, bruising, minor second degree tissue damage and fracturing of the bones. (  when B-rank:20,10 chakra is being used ) 
A-ranked: 3 inch, major bruising and internal bruising, minor third degree tissue damage, and bone breakage. ( when A-rank:25,10 chakra is being used )
S-ranked: limb severage, major external and internal bruising, rupturing of organs, major third degree tissue damage, and bone shattering. (when S-rank:30,20 chakra is being used )


Range:D-rank: 5 meters ( Knockback is used )


Speed:S-rank: 50 meters a second ( nearly undodgable but there are exceptions this is not op unless i use it on a genin or chunin. besides i don't plan on using it unless against a jounin , sannin, kage etc. and even then only as a last resort. )


Size:B-rank: 7.5 meter diameter( when B-rank:20,10 chakra is being used) A-rank: 15 meter diameter ( when A-rank:25,10 chakra is being used ) S-rank: 25 meter diameter ( when S-rank:30,20 chakra is being used )


Duration: One post (PER battle)


Cool down: Cools down after approximately 24 hour's of use


Description: Degan has perfected his Taijutsu specialty with much practice and hard work This attack is used when using the Taijutsu Specialty. By flowing a large amount of chakra into one fist , degan can amass a large physical amount of damage with one punch , should the punch land then the opponent " WILL" be wounded considerably... If the attack misses Degan is left feeling extremely exhausted , therefore the attack is usually only used by him as a last resort.

Degan's Total chakra use is: A-rank:250, The jutsu at it's strongest uses  S-ranked:30 chakra points are used to activate, 20 chakra points are used to maintain the jutsu per  post.

Ryo cost for this jutsu's word count: C-rank: 750 words, 300 ryo


Last edited by Degan on Fri 1 Aug - 11:19; edited 11 times in total (Reason for editing : Completely changed and updated this post... you should love it now)
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PostSubject: Re: Boulder Fist Jutsu! ( perfected Form )   Mon 21 Jul - 18:54

okay so in your description put the range speed and size to something... what is that big, what is moving that fast, and what is reaching the range of five meters? thanks =P also next time just post it in the regular justu Area and then it will be moved here after it's approved and that training is complete, also please wait until your character is approved before you post in other things...
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PostSubject: Re: Boulder Fist Jutsu! ( perfected Form )   Fri 25 Jul - 1:34

okay , i changed alot , hope it is better this time.
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PostSubject: Re: Boulder Fist Jutsu! ( perfected Form )   Fri 25 Jul - 7:54

add in the Damage of what it does to the Target when they are hit... Shattered bones? death? what? and you do realize that this justu will have a SET amount of chakra per usage and pouring more chakra into it will not make it stronger?
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PostSubject: Re: Boulder Fist Jutsu! ( perfected Form )   Fri 25 Jul - 8:11

yes i understand that.
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PostSubject: Re: Boulder Fist Jutsu! ( perfected Form )   Fri 25 Jul - 8:15

Damage Result's have been added.
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PostSubject: Re: Boulder Fist Jutsu! ( perfected Form )   Fri 25 Jul - 9:07

Okay Approved... now to Training =P
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PostSubject: Re: Boulder Fist Jutsu! ( perfected Form )   Fri 25 Jul - 9:09

woop ! Thank you ^.^
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PostSubject: Re: Boulder Fist Jutsu! ( perfected Form )   Fri 1 Aug - 11:18

I have worked hard editing this jutsu , i feel it can now be worthy to truly... be considered a formidable attack , and i would like for it to be a fully approved jutsu , that degan has already spent half of his life perfecting and no longer need's training.
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