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PostSubject: Loly's Justu's   Fri 8 Aug - 4:53

D Rank:
 

C rank Lightning:
 


C rank earth:
 
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PostSubject: Re: Loly's Justu's   Thu 14 Aug - 2:54

Loly wrote:
D Rank:
 

C rank Lightning:
 


C rank earth:
 



Rank: D
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Element: Doton
Range: Short (0-5m)
Speciality: Ninjutsu
Duration: Instant, mud lasts two turns.
Cooldown: Three turns
Hand Seals: Tiger
Description: The user forms the related hand seal, turning the ground beneath the target's feet into a massive river of mud that throws them off balance and drags them away from the user. This costs 10 chakra.
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Remove the Chakra drain, and it’s approved


Name: Earth Release: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique (Doton: Shinjū Zanshu no Jutsu - 土遁・心中斬首の術)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: Doton
Range: Short (0-5m)
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1-3 Posts
Cooldown: Duration + 2
Description: This technique conceals the user underground and drags the object of their attack down into the earth, robbing them of their freedom. In addition, they can start another attack. The user is able to remain underground for a maximum of 3 posts before having to surface
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I will approve this on the condition that you note anyone above genin rank can break out of this move

Unless they are paralyzed by genjutsu or other means, it makes sense that a higher ranked ninja could break out of a d rank move.

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Name: Lightning Release: Uprising (雷遁・反乱 - Raiton: Hanran)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 10 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user much place the palms of their hands on a solid surface and force Raiton chakra into the area below them. Once the appropriate amount of chakra has been channeled, it erupts up and outwards into a shockwave that will race outwards in all directions for 10 meters before dispersing. Anything caught by the shockwave will take C-rank Raiton damage; 1st and 2nd degree flash burns on unprotected flesh, severe pain, and 1 post of stun.

Approved

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Name: Lightning Release: Discharge (Raiton: Hōden - 雷: 放電)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C-A
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 5-30 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 2-4 posts
Description: The user concentrates Lightning Release chakra around the body before releasing it towards their opponent. The amount of chakra used determines the range, damage, and cooldown of the jutsu.

C-rank: 5 meters || 2 post cooldown || 1st degree flash burns. Moderate shock.
B-rank: 15 meters || 3 posts cooldown || 2nd degree flash burns. Severe shock.
A-rank: 30 meters || 4 posts cooldown || 2nd and 3rd degree flash burns. 1 post stun.

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With the A rank you could probably make it 2 to 3 turns if you like, but I would up the cooldown to 6 post and it would be approved

As it is, it is approvable, but get more for your money I say.
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